/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1825034
Hey dude! like always, your level of abstraction and patterning is very good, promising image.

Im on a laptop without tablet or mouse, so here is a little trackpad adjustment on your painting.

I think this painting calls for some contrast in simplicity and the textured arrangment of the ground/vines roots thingies. so maybe simplify some shapes, to get a nice flow goung throughout the image.

I thought it would be cool if some light passed through and lit the ground between the two characters, essentially bouncing lots of warm light from underneath on the girl char, and also to help create some contrast on the focal point. Again... im on a laptop, so my text is probably better than what i am showing ;)

Draftmanship dude! (ill stop being such a bitch about it ;) dont worry.. i just think you have promise)