/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3940130
Lolita anon here, there's no regression construct anon, your poses are as God tier as always. But you should try cleaning up your drawings next time, they're full of potential and you might like how the construction lines look its hard to appreciate how good the pose is since the lines are distracting.

Here I tried adding paint over it and erasing the construction. I'd be proud if that was my drawing, and (You) did that behind all the construction lines so congrats.
Also, I've been too busy to properly draw on paper, but here's my try at explaining what I meant days ago by
>draw smaller faces
Using the exact same head you drew, I did a smaller face that's less cartoony, I remember you wanted to do more realistic faces and that's the obvious first step, get rid of the giant eyes and use like half the space you're using now to draw it. Also with more space free for the hair, it'll look less flat.
And again your drawings have potential but you gotta try polishing them. Also if you ever scan them, you'll have an easy time painting them on Photoshop since your guidelines are very specific. You can have a layer with those guidelines below and paint over them, following them with some transparency.