/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1900872
As for the Muse, the torso is fine this time around, it only looks that way cause she's a petite skinny bitch (read, anorexic). Here's the construction on it. I gave the legs more musculature and defenition, still maintaining that skinny look, which, while I understand may not be for everyone, it's how I wanna characterize her, she's short, skinny, and bitchy.

I think that overall, it is an improvement over the last one. The hair looks more natural, and she actually looks more like a mage, and less like a groupie (while still maintaining that music-lover aspect which I do wanna keep for specific reasons).

Here's the construction for her with some overlay line art. You can kinda make out the outlines for the torso and such, it's proportionate man.