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>>7000494
Here's what I would do:
Everything in the image is moving from the lower left to the title in the upper right, so I would adjust the positions of the bats to just further accentuate that idea/movement.
I would also probably drop the castle/house further into the background, except for a few of the interior lights. I think it makes the castle more mysterious and keeps the title in focus.
Lastly as a little extra touch, I just moved a tombstone in front of another to add a bit more depth.

I got no formal training and just watch YouTube videos so take what I say lightly. I like your drawing though!

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