/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6896112
I think you might need to build some spacial reasoning. Few things I see at a glance:
Where you have a heavy line contouring her breast, think about the grid of the fibers of her shirt. Her breast is stretching them, and they will follow the curvature of it, before relaxing back to straight up and down. So the outside line of her breast should stay to the outside. Because you have it going to the middle of her torso, it looks unnatural. Same thing happens with the forearm to our left.
Her shorts also look like they're supposed to be squishing her thigh down but on the thigh down. You did a decent job with the leg to our left, but the right one it gradually thickens instead of immediately bulging out like something normally would. There's some more stuff like the elipses on the drink being sloppy and no indication of the material of her shorts having any thickness.