/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4724641
I don't want to put that much effort into someone else's waifu but I tried redrawing the pose more thoroughly this time for learning purposes. Genuinely want to know what glaring mistakes there are. Also, maybe muscle memory isn't the right term because i do still try to deconstruct in my head and use muscle memory more for shape design. Still, i know i progress at a pretty slow pace and that there are better ways to practice. I'm just too stubborn