/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2897243
pic related

Uninteresting model/ref or imagination/pose. I'm sure you can't into dancing.
torso or whole body too big for the face
large womyn (c) america
super long arms that even overlap the head length (is she 7 feet tall?)
wtf collar bone
robot / cartoon hands
not so straight sword
wrong facial lines and mouth outline is wtf (looks like old man)
cheeks stung by wasps
thicc but not cute (unless you're into feminism my western foe)