/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3791491
I'm not actually good at this, so don't copy this, but I think you can see my point. also i think that if you choose to go with that style of drawing, you should choose between thick but closed lines, or thin but open. I may be wrong though, that sounds like a personal opinion.

And I like the drawing a lot, especially the face, but that line art actually distract me from the drawing itself. I think you'd gain a lot buy working on it a bit, it'd jump from okay to actually good.

>>3791528
yeah, it looks like an easy way to have a clean looking piece. And I forgot the anime actually uses this kind of lines uh