/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2643748
As others said, the pistol being moved so there's some negative space between it and the girl's head would make it more readable and give a stronger silhouette.

Something about the colors in this bugs me. I'm not sure what it is exactly but they seem dull. I made an edit here to try to show some more contrast and hue-shifting, though note that I exaggerated the blues by making them really light. I get that the jacket is supposed to be dark blue.

A also made a small edit to the eyes and mouth. I made the mouth subtler and the eyes much smaller as well. In the original, her mouth looks really wide, and oddly reminds me of Jim from The Office. As for the eyes, I felt they were too large, like she has huge blue irises but with no white or even any pupils.