/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4771346
I’ve never really done a lot of the cel shaded look (or at least done a good job with it) so this is a little bit out of my wheelhouse but I put some basic lighting fundies in the picture. The big thing that stands out to me is her body below her tits would probably be somewhat in shadow with an overhead lighting. I think another thing that flattens your picture in the bottom panel is the highlights feel kinda randomly placed. Your highlights should be placed on the planes of the body most perpendicular to the direction of the light source. I’d say try practicing with a night time setting and a singular strong source of light. This should simplify the process of rendering quite a bit and help you get a better feel for defining forms with values.