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>>1667957
The head is too big and you should consider pushing it back as well.
Also the face is too wide right now. Move it closer to the ear line so you have less cheek. The jaw line could be tweaked as well.

A few tips I can give you are to drop imaginary vertical lines from vital points and see where they interact with the rest of the body, look for balance and symmetry. Another one is to give more attention to various lengths. Also, draw a middle line and try to follow it.
That'a about it. Flip the canvas a few times when drawing the construction and choose a neutral color for the background so it doesn't interfere with your color perception.

Otherwise, this looks pretty oldschool, I like it. Keep it up!