/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3333047
In the last pose, the left knee has a lot more of the fabric which crosses over from the inner leg to the outer leg but you only drew lines for the outer. There are also some interesting shapes on the bottom of the left leg that you didn't capture as well as the stacking in the first image. I think some of the lines are a little thick and it's difficult to actually tell whether the guy is wearing denim or sweatpants some of the time: the cuff of the right leg at the back doesn't fall onto the leg as it should. The stiffness in denim is much different between the pair in the first two images and the third image. Look at some Leyendecker illustrations for inspiration on shape design in clothing. His Marines illustrations won't be exactly what you want but just observe his work and think about the material he's illustrating. The biggest contrasts in value or color are where you're probably going to place an inked edge.