/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Sat Dec 21 11:34:48 2019 No.4268548 [View]
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>>4265626
My guy although I appreciate you making the hair adjust on the arm to show that it isn't flat that's not enough.
The rest of the hair needs to as well. She's on a pillow but her hair is still flat.
Did you ever look at someone's hair lying down?
Spread her hair out more. Octopus it to give it flavor. Also her bangs are flat, and floating. Asian hair sticks to the face.
I know it's more cartoony but these are the issue I see.
Also there's no shade on the bed from her or the guy.

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