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>>1669436

Thanks. Also, I'd say you've run into the same problem as the person studying Sargent - you didn't plan out your piece and went on with it anyways. You have to set yourself up for lovely work.

Also, my advice would be to take this back to thumbnail, completely paint over and remove any detail you have so nothing in your painting is precious, then set it up graphically. I'd say set this on a dark grey background, fill the image mostly with black crows flocking all around, with white plate and a light grey face framed by black. Also take the time to consider your story and the mood, and see if your composition of abstract shapes supports it.

Also, another finished sketch.