/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6232965
Face looks like it has been melted.
>>6232968
This bitch is like a 100ft tall
>>6232970
I don't even know what emotion the writer was going for because the chick's eyes are all fucked
>>6232972
Now it looks like there are some people in the background out of focus, was this intentional? Did the writer mean to show how the character feels alone in a world despite it teeming with people thus making the city feel empty to her?

Looks like she isn't actually 100ft tall sleeping on trees.
All the trees are different, was this intentional or did the writer just tell the AI to make trees with no care to consistency between shots?
>>6232974
The Times Square shot isn't actually empty there are people in the shot if you zoom in (right above .. before "SO"), again is this the writer trying to convey how isolated she feels or did the dumbass not see the people walking around.
>>6232976
Shots like this are the new Chin Down Eyes Up meme.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z9dg8PI2sEg
Some of the structures look only a few inches thick too.
Lighting is all fucked too.
>>6232978
Everything is all fucked and keeps changing, again was this intentional?
>>6232981
Now she is back to looking freakishly tall.
>>6232985
great the scene changes color and style and I still can't tell if the writer meant to do this.
>>6232988
So is the city destroyed because in half the pages so far the city looks ok just abandoned, while in other pages it looks like it was fucking bombed to shit.
>>6232992
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>>6232998
The story went full retard and I bet the colors changed to blue because the AI thinks blue = sci-fi.
I doubt any of the colors used so far have any meaning.
>>6233009
Uh so are the butterflies supposed to be her thoughts and feelings now?
Or are they the memories and feelings she had with someone else who is now dead/gone?
>>6233016
I think I get it but this shit is still retarded and it is hard to know what was intentional and what was just AI derping/writer being retarded.