/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4991238
Not really /int/ but.
I'd add some ever so slightly fat pads to her upper legs and sides of her hips and waist to make her softer and cuddly also I'd gently curve her ribcage on the left side since that's how real ribcages look, your's kinda looks like a straight line, it wouldn't be straight like that unless you're going for a specific style in which case go ahead.
Also remember that humans have scapulas and have armpits, your arm should be connected to the ribcage more. It looks like you stuck it on instead of being connected, I get that it's reaching behind but maybe draw the connections of the deltoid, pecs, lats region a bit or maybe give some hints of it being there to look better.
Also make sure to remember that the skull curves into an eliptical more it doesn't just slightly bend, your head now looks kinda flat with a slight bend, look up real skulls, anime skulls are base on that.