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Anonymous Sun May 12 01:29:32 2019 No.3927683 [View]
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I need some help on this. The arm is supposed to be in an L shape, with the forearm across his face, but it doesnt read right to me. The arm looks broken instead of turned.

Can anyone redline this for me and show the correct way to draw the arm?

Anonymous Sun May 12 01:04:57 2019 No.3927664 [DELETED]

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Posted this 30m ago but im reposting with the barely improved version before i go to sleep.

I need some help on this. The arm is supposed to be in an L shape, with the forearm across his face, but it doesnt read right to me. I changed the hand construction a bit to look angled and that helped slightly but it still looks off.

Can anyone redline this for me and show the correct way to draw the arm?

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