/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6936587
I think there are a lot of things you could do. Looking with zero saturation can help you see absolute value better. It looks like the mushroom's highlight is much too bright. The way you've rendered her skin it looks pretty reflective and almost oily. Reflective objects tend to have sharper contrast from light to dark, and matte objects less so. Mushrooms are generally very matte. The biggest mushroom also looks like the cap is bent at a weird angle. It is pretty near eye level so the ellipse the cap follows should be close to flat. Also the disconnect between the incredibly high saturation and lack of texture on the mushrooms make them seem less real. With the blue glow, it should also be reflecting and illuminating her neck and clavicle area, and be tinting the reflections on her skin blue, though the main glow could stand to be less saturated.