/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Because im avoiding work (and because i wish you'd all cheer up)

Jozu - you put a moderate amount of effort into the face and shoulders, but after that you slowly gave up and threw construction out the window. i honestly would have just cropped out everything around the shoulders. also, try using harder edges and deeper contrast with your shading.

Louse - really enjoy your studies! im a sucker for hard edges and blocked in not-quite-rendered coloring. you may want to study different lighting and how it falls on the human body though. your tentacle girl has acceptable anatomy but the colors are muddy, like you laid down confident shading and smudged/blurred it all to hell. (im guilty of this also, dont feel too bad)

Soroneir - the colors and sky are pleasing, but it's overall flat. unless you're doing thumbs, try rendering a few of the really close-up objects next time.

Nelli - thumb looks like shit, but the full pic actually reads pretty nice. personally i wish you'd rendered the head just a little more, but that's just me. i love bribs.

Chimerya - no idea whats going on with the left guy's torso- is it being sucked into the couch? same goes for the legs. next time, sketch the general shape for the ENTIRE form, instead of starting at the head and tacking on each body part as you go down. that'll ensure you end up with shit proportioning far less. (like setting up scaffolding before building). right figure looks ok. you've failed his ass though, and that makes us all sad.

CRT - study more figures and perspective m8, even just basic stuff. there's alot going wrong here, but i assume this was a doodle for funsies so i wont harp on you- for now. (that ear makes me want to kill myself though)

HumanBean - this could be really badass if it looked less flat. i would've done bigger heads in a lesser number, so i could spend time making them three-dimensional without wasting my whole day rendering 20 goddamn heads.

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