/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg, kill me. I couldnt feel the form of the beard and i did only two plates. Its over.
>>6534141
i suggest doing book called Keys to Drawing
>>6534064
you dont need to do whole book as previous anon, just this part
https://archive.org/details/Keys_to_Drawing/page/70
>>6534035
i already kneeled to this, you sure are taking your time making it. Godlike
>>6534018
soul + maxed out creativity
>>6533958
anon... that isnt fat ass. If you want to capture the COOMer market you gonna enhance the curves way way more
>>6533894
very nice, the best is the maze and falling pumpkin
>>6533807
the legs and torso arent properly aligned. did you use reference?
>>6533658
that pic has broken perspective (i think), you drew the wall as if you are looking at steep angle but the floor is perfectly aligned with viewer. The fix is easy: just crop the wall. And yes being beg is hell
>>6533654
Cute little coding project anon, but i think you are better off practicing sighting on real objects, be it figures or just still life. Because then you are learning multiple stuff at once, not just proportions
>>6533615
The few places online all recommended this book, cant vouch for its quality personally though
https://archive.org/details/Color_and_Light_James_Gurney_English/
>>6533516
i think the issue are body proportions. Her hips and thighs are omega huge and dont really fit the rest of the body. Remeber: begs NEED to use reference every single time otherwise they are just cementing bad habits
>>6533397
anon... everybody ends up drawing contours one way or another
>>6533349
that is very BEG spider. But you felt the form somewhat so i give you thumbs up
>>6533229
very cool
>>6533158
out of 6 beg books only 2 mentioned anatomy. And the two both said anatomy is completely optional and study it casually at leisure tempo and only if you find it personally interesting. Nicolaides especially warns students to never confuse stiff accurate diagrams with drawings which should always display gesture