/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3484054
Hair line comes down to the ears
Nose doesn't match the style of the anime eyes or the anime eyes and eyebrows don't match the rest of the face. Eyebrows should be closer together
Chin is strange, it is lop sided, I don't know if you purposely made the sharp/weak(?), but a males have a more square jawline
Shoulders should be a bit wider, the neck (chin to collarbone) should be long as half the face
Shading is all over the place (where is the light source?)

I think you should draw from photos and draw what you see and look at proportions of the face, after that then come back to drawing with your imagination. Good luck.