/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1613516
>I wasn't aiming for dynamic sense of action.He's not jumping across the sails
Dynamics doesn't just refer to 'actions' in the traditional sense, but having flow throughout the figure and an interesting gesture. Look up a contrapposto and how a stationary figure can be 'dynamic'. Pic related.

>at this stage of renderring Im not going to burn it and start over :/
Time already invested doesn't change the value of a piece. People judge the results, not the time stamp, to determine whether they like a piece or not. The pose in the redline isn't perfect, but it is clearly an improvement.

If you want to call this done and move on, I understand. However, if you spend a lot of time on a piece and later realize that something isn't working, don't be afraid to change it.

As an aside, consider thumbnail exploration before committing to a piece to avoid situations like this in the future:
http://pastebin.com/fZM8NdBr