/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2201423
Dude your work looks good, ok. The kind of advice you need is much more refined and educated that the kind you will find here.
At first glance, there's something off with her expression, but that's fixable with a couple of pencil lines. If you do it again from zero it will come good for sure.
Then you have the anatomy on her upper body, knowing basic body figure you can create cool shadows and cloth folding around her muscles and bone structure. But any drawing teacher can show you that on the spot easily. Find some drawing art class nearby, it doesn't have to be "famous" or anything, just a normal drawing teacher will do. You have talent so you just need some basic pointers, and then is all about daily practice and repetition.