/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2527032
I like your line work, I would recommend leaving some thin because nearly all the lines have weight to them and some features need a more delicate touch. My method is a little different, I smear the composition one flat grey color with graphite/charcoal, then carve out the lights with an eraser an add darks afterward, then carve out ambient lights with the eraser again. I like the confidence in your strokes, but again some lines need to be much subtler. Otherwise, I like your style. The first image you linked, the eyes and mouth, and some of the nose are too heavy, subtler lining and only heavy lines where the shadow truly shows would make it seem more realistic than bold and a bit cartoony. More delicacy.