/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3480299
Intended final pose is pic related, or at least something close enough (not sure whether the spine is straight or curved due to half squatting).

>maybe have the right leg more straighten up and forward
Well, considering that she is squatting a little, it kinda hard to keep a leg straight without changing the pose. Or are you suggesting to change the pose to something closer like extended leg squat or something? I could adjust the leg so it would point toward the camera more hence it would appear more straight as in the bending won't be as apparent, I guess? Redline might be useful.

>She also looks like she gets smaller, further away from the camera at the end.
I know the head gets smaller mid-turn but what else specifically?

>Breasts have too much up movement, and not enough side movement. They should drag behind the body on the turn.
Yeah, got carried away there. Thanks, I'll see to it.