/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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I don't hate you, anon. You have a lot of potential believe or not. I was only hard on you because I feel like you're too reluctant to break out of your comfort zone. This Asuka drawing has some anatomical issues, but I do like it better than the last one as it's at least more inline with her actual character. The legs in particular are the weakest point. The proportions are too skewed.
Her calves and feet are too tiny. Also her facial expression is too dead. She really isn't really expressing anything at all. What is she meant to be feeling or expressing? Be more mindful that the face serves a purpose beyond just being there.

I highly suggest you start doing more anatomy and nude studies. Become more familiar with the musculature and skeletal form, then learn to construct it. Everyone here would just suggest Loomis, but I suggest
-Anatomy For Sculptors
-Force by Micheal D. Mattesi
-MORPHO:Simplified Forms by Michel Lauricella
(most of them you can find in the art book thread)

Do this in tandem with studying Hideaki Anno's art for Eva (or who ever you want desu). His style is a distinct exaggeration so I only recommend doing this in tandem with studies of nude models as to not to become a carbon copy. You can do it!

How bout that

Post THE resource that has helped you the most in boosting your skills

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