/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4033435
Nice work with the folds on the gown. I'm only going to roughly suggest some colour changes.

the bright area on the hair takes a lot of attention. I lowered it's value, saturation, and also a cooler hue while adjusting some of the darker shadows too. Some small highlights to suggest the flow of the hair will look much nicer.

Knocked back the light area on the dress, too. moved the shade forward to reduce the attention it demands on your eyes, it's better to keep the face the main focal point. Also, added some grey-er vibes into the shade of the dress to give it a more pleasant feel.