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Anonymous Wed Jul 5 17:57:25 2023 No.6728388 [View]
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>>6728311
That’s very disturbing, good job.

I’m too /beg/ to do a proper redline but here’s what I can see is wrong. It looks like her upper arm and her forearm come from two different poses, so there’s a disconnect. It kinda looks like you subconsciously wanted to have her forearm visible, so it ended up awkwardly disjointed.

I think you did pretty good with the body language and expressions, they really convey a weird, vaguely lusty sort of predator/prey scenario.

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