/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2716527
I did a little paintover showing a few things. I think having a softer quality to hair is important for it to look like hair. I know Mucha did those hard spaghetti strands but he was a master and is a sort of special case because his design sense made up for the strange way to show hair. In general keep it soft.

Also you are shading hair the wrong way. Basically because of the fact it is made up of tens of thousands of little strands means it reacts to light differently so the highlights go across the forms.

Lastly her neck is bent at an impossible or at least very uncomfortable angle, so to have her peacefully sleeping I moved her body.