/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2199109
>Spot the commie

>>2199101
About the drawing in general, his legs are too far apart. His whole hips seem to be far behind the torso, and the pants you chose make it look like he has a huge ass. I would also recommend for you to study faces. His eyes are to close, and look cartoony as fuck, his eyebrows are inexpressive, his nostril doesn't look tridimentional. His teeth are all wrong, even for a cartoon, as his lower teeth should be thiner than the upper ones.

His pose, face and clothings are pretty unintimidating. First I would recommend you look for the badass nazi uniforms for reference. I believe russian uniforms are pretty cool as well. If you are going for Castro he has to look less oficial and more like a guerrilla combatant. This halfway look isn't cutting it. Also, he may need a beard, a hat, hair? Something needs to be a simbol, you know, like most of these guys had mustaches.

For details, as you look for reference, try to integrate medals, an armband, simbols in the cap, some other colors to break this awful wall of green. Also don't forget your evil red.