/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Sat Aug 3 23:52:54 2013 No.1515655 [View]
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Sorry for bothering again with the same work, but I've learned quite a lot with it and I think I'm finally on the right track. However I have 2 questions.
Which version looks more pleasant/feminine? (inb4 neither)

The one on the right is my latest rev. but I feel the one on the left has more "character" or looks more interesting.

2. Any guides/tips to foreshorten the face. I reviewed some references/mirrored the drawing but I swear I can't grasp it, I only know that her right eye still looks odd.

Thanks in advance

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