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>>	Anonymous Thu Nov 7 12:00:12 2013 No.1582475 [View] File: 400 KB, 1000x701, redriding3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any thoughts on the general composition?

Anonymous Thu Nov 7 11:39:53 2013 No.1582463 [View]
File: 400 KB, 1000x701, redriding3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Hi /ic/.

I was working on this rather clichey piece of little red with ink on paper, but decided to scan it and get it "done" in PS before I print it and finishing by stripling on paper.

What I was wondering was if you'd be so kind as to share some thoughts on the general composition, the posing and the gun.. I have very little experience with guns, so I might be coming back for more help in that regard.

I already see that her shoulder would have to be very wide for her to be holding the gun like that, will fix after dinner!

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