/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2837498
Yeah, my take on the situation is that the neck line is falling to short and giving the impression that her neck is twisting, so if you brought it out a little farther that may help. As well, I feel that her left shoulder may be to large in proportion to her right. This is just what I think may be the issue, but other anons may see things that I have missed. I love the pastel aesthetic although!