/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Fri Dec 1 19:09:36 2023 No.6960246 [View]
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>>6960131
Not sure if you're looking for any kind of crit, but I like this wip so far. I think you've got some good motion of the camera, good acting on the character. I like the angles used. I think the first action where they pull the chain apart could be stronger if the line of the chain looked more straight or something... I'm not sure... But I think the last shot where the chain wraps around the hand is strong. Nice work.

Some of my own shots I did a little bit ago...

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