/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1702886
there you go.

left one: head is not properly connected to the ribcage through the spine. also you are thinking too flat, which made the shoulders weird.

right one: you pelvis is too low (though mine might be too high) and the legs are weird. and again, you're thinking a little too flat, you notice this especially on the face and her right shoulder.
also i just noticed: breast might be too high (i got that wrong in the redline too)

tldr: try to get more accustomed to the forms, think more 3 dimensionally.