/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1756878

Here is my take on it. The main problem I thought was that the top of the hips seemed to be going back but then the bottom was facing front, but you fixed that somewhat. There's still a bunch of problems with the lower half though, (in mine too most likely). You're clearly pretty good at drawing so you should be able to correct it all by looking up a bit of lower body construction, which would be more helpful to you than me pretending to know more than I actually know ;_;

Aside from that something I would personally recommend is trying to avoid having arms perpendicular to the camera. You can get away with one but when it's both it sorts of flattens your figure. even moving it back or forth slightly should help.