/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3891642
You are the necromancer lolita Anon right?

I think you are doing alright for your level. The part where it doesn't look 3D is because the hair doesn't have enough shading on it. From the body I can gather that a rimlight is coming from bottom and some less powerful from the front. The hair is a very reflective surface when clean or wet meaning it will have a wide range from dark to bright. On your picture it is way too bright and could use more dark spots but it is hard to tell its shape because of the messy floaty nature it has on your picture.

Another thing that stick out for me is the white eyes it is important to note that the eyes are never fully pure white in real life, they can change from yellowish to red from person to person and how their health is. They white parts of the eye can also be darker while in shadow. Using this idea you can put the eyes closer to űthe rest of the face and you can even put white hightlight spots on it (yes just like in anime) to give them that glassy feel.

Unless you were going for a "Glowing eyes" effect. If yo uwere then you can achieve that by adding on some light airbrushy fog around them and make them pop out by making them pure white/bright colored.

I provided examples what do you think?