/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

This was originally going to be a 10 minute study until I started and realized I have no clue on how to construct a figure beyond those 2 cubes, so it extended into a 30 minute study.

Issues I found are his upper body is too small, making the legs look way too big. His hand is too big and his head is too small. He's missing part of his shoulder. His right arm is too big. Feel free to point out everything else.

Right now I'm on chapter 1 of Vilppu and I plan on just doing gestures for 1-2 weeks before moving onto chapter 2 (I'll still do gestures when I proceed). That said if you look at this and can think of any immediate books/sites that would help I'd love to hear it.