/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7067325
very nice, compositionally it works great. Since you're good already I'll give you some harsher opinions
I feel like the twisting of the hair is a bit confusing in the middle, it feels more like water that's combining than hair and the play on small/large shapes of it is kind of lackluster
the pixelated edge around the stock photo skeleton is really ugly and in general try to have more control over your mixed media background
all in all it reads really well but I also feel like it's a bit messy. I take it you use the blur tool a lot? and layer types like overlay dodge ect. or something like that? perhaps planning the shapes of the light and then adding them will help you out.
The image kinda starts falling apart because of this the moment you look at it past the initial "wow that looks cool" part

>>7067800
The artist on the left either draws lines slower or in shorter/more varied stroke lengths. Check the right sleeve for example where there is a little tuck just before it goes for a loop whereas yours is kind of a hard cylinder.