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Anonymous Wed Sep 18 12:26:09 2013 No.1549940 [View]
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>>1549934

You've completely lost your subject by adding too much. It's overworked, messy and lacks contrast in the right areas.
The environment kind of overwhelms the subject, the cast shadow below the subject is way too dark.
You've got a tangential shade touching the tip of the screw, which confuses the depth.

It actually was better before. It doesn't help your subject is shit.

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