/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

first serious attempt at non-pixel digital art in quite a while. i know the linework's pretty wonky (i'm using a touchpad since i still haven't decided if i want to invest in a tablet just yet) but i'm mostly looking for critique on the anatomy/style so i can actually try and color it
>inb4 "no anime"
>>4544656
dunno about you but the shape of their eyebrows and eyes are totally different than the ones you drew so yours ends up a lot more neutral-looking

dunno if i'm supposed to post this here or in /beg/ but here's my first serious attempt at digital art in a year or two. kawaii anime girls aren't exactly my comfort zone when it comes to drawing bodies so feel free to be as harsh as you need to be
>>4542913
>>4544574
i think what >>4544567's issue with the collarbones is that they almost look like they're curved instead of straight and interlocked with the shoulders. i think defining the middle part where the neck connects with them would also help them look a bit more believable