/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5248227
these would look good on a face
>>5248249
looks like a female drew it, I like the style
>>5248293
could use more clearly defined bone structure if you're going for realism
>>5248325
hid hands the same way i do
>>5248368
it's not bad but you need to study facial proportions
>>5248382
I'm not sure what you're going for, the lighting values are visible but the way you're portraying them isn't that pleasing to me
>>5248610
absolutely look into varying your line thickness
>>5248963
charge more, you're making me look bad
>>5249019
people will say chickenscratch but it's really not bad enough to matter
>>5249176
disgusting, excellent job
>>5249220
are you drawing from reference? you should be
>>5249243
I'm sure it's part of the style you're going for but her right arm is uncannily detached from her torso, face looks good
>>5249274
I think this could benefit from line thickness variation too
>>5249757
you need to make him thicker all around to better capture the original image
>>5249792
gmi
>>5249808
looks good except for the face
>>5249814
reminds me of something that might be in one of Shel Silverstein's books
>>5250114
her head seems a little too large for her body
>>5250116
of the two, I like this one more
>>5250119
gmi
>>5250195
this is personal bias but I really like meme redraws
>>5250258
work on your prospective but cool design
>>5250342
it's cool but finish it
>>5250355
solid, reminds me of DND
>>5250367
post more than one panel
>>5250390
why piss
>>5250634
one of my favorites out of the ones I replied to so far
>>5251322
people who fill in the the void of characters who dont have a lot of porn are based
>>5251447
I think the wax drips are too regular-looking
>>5251534
study more feet
>>5251671
soulful
>>5251714
it's alright, eyes seems a bit wonky
>>5252272
if this is supposed to be as seen through a peephole adding some distortion would be cool
>>5252423
great job portraying detail without going overboard

how do I learn how to texture things?

I was commissioned for some art of Giant Princess, I don't actually see her on the roll charts though