/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3032574
The picture was an eyes study, but I feel like I did this exercise better the last time I went (partially) through keys to drawing. My observation really's gone to shit since then.

I really struggle with getting the angles and proportions just right. I see that they're wrong, I can vaguely tell how they're wrong, but when I put my pencil down on paper to make the angles and lines they always wind up fucked. The shading (drawing shapes of shadow) helps cover this up to some degree, but I really struggle on linework. I do a page of Draw a Box line practice as warmup every day but it feels like there's something obvious that I'm missing.

>>3032564
Pic related, if anyone wants to take a look at it.