/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4649494
This is an extremely common problem. The issue is often that your sketches feel more dynamic because you are drawing more loosely. Lineart tends to stiffen things up. One solution to this problem is sketching with even more exaggerated gesture, so that when things inevitably stiffen up it will feel more like your original vision. Another solution is drawing your lineart more dynamically. Try to draw in as few strokes as possible, using broad sweeping motions to draw curves. Draw with your shoulder and elbow, not your wrist.

Another problem you may have is that you are not very proficient at employing different line weights. See pic for an example of how putting thought into line weight can improve your art.

>>3029142
Your sketch has line variation, while your finished line is just the same all over, making it look boring