/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3883530
a couple of things i think you should consider; obscuring the brazier with the pillar suggests there is still a large distance to the top of the staircase making it appear really large. This also makes the angle of attack for lighting the ground plane of the stairs too sharp(i think). the secondary light at the bottom of the stairs doesn't read particularly well. add more stairs! the height traversed by so few steps makes them seem uncomfortable to use. I really would have preferred a lower horizon line, so you could see the landing above and have had the main light cast on it, thus, from top to bottom, dark -> light -> stairs (alternating light&dark). Trying to keep the general composition though i would try something as attached. We will make it one day nonanon, keep cranking out the art.