/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Fri Jul 11 06:34:09 2014 No.1776300 [View]
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>>1776184
youve obviously put a lot of time into coloring and shading... my problems with this image are mostly about the form of the face, which ive tried to demonstrate with this sketch.
first and foremost, i feel like you need to pick a perspective that is consistent and believable... the way the eyes line up with the ears... the amount of space between the features... the view would see more of the bottom of the nose...
the shape of the eyebrows is wak...
i dont really like your coloring much either actually, but the form bugs me more... i kinda like some of the lighting tho. particularly the highlights. just keep practicing.

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