/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2583967
It's quite off. I appreciate how ambitious the shot you attempted is, but there's a great deal you need to learn about setting up a three point perspective grid, scaling objects correctly in space, maintaining proportion, etc. Work your way up to a shot this difficult. For now try to figure out how to do standard shots correctly. Foreshortening shouldn't be thought of as getting the right shape the right size in the right spot. It's more of a complex perspective problem that can be worked out if your understanding of the principles is strong enough.