/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2798225
Since I was the anon that pointed this out first, I'll give you my opinion of how to make what you're trying to do workable.

Late reply sorry, but ever since like 2-3 threads back I've seen you post I've thought you needed to make the eyes bigger to remove that negative space between the eyes and imo this makes what you're trying to do look better. But what is more clear is that you're trying to hit "stylization" too early before you got more of your anatomy and fundamental knowledge down first. I can tell from how the girls upper body construction is, it lacks confidence of how the skeleton would be underneath the skin and same for the muscle structure.

But to the point of the argument, if you're going to keep the "eyes reach the sides of the face", make them bigger. But get more skull anatomy knowledge first so you know WHERE they should be so you can exaggerate them later.