/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6830828
>>6833792
>>6833822
My advice is for you to just move on to a new drawing instead of polishing a turd.
The pose is bad, she looks like she's weightless and you initially drew her upright but rotated her 45 degrees. It doesn't look at all like she's supporting her weight with her left arm. You values are bad and your rendering is very muddy. There's almost never a time when you should shade with black.
I think you're trying to move on to drawing dynamic illustrations too soon when you haven't even gotten the fundamentals down yet.