/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3291061
Sorry if my sketch is difficult to make out. The blue is the rough skeletal shape, orange is the muscle shapes, and pink is the center line/overall curve of the figure. I'm also assuming the character is supposed to be lying down.
-Don't make the lines of the hips so angular, especially when the hip turns into the thigh. It should be more curved and subtle.
-Pay attention to the shape of the ribs and how they protrude.
-The ab muscles are closer to the center, yours are too wide.
-Make sure the angles and positions of the muscles follow a smooth curve down the middle.
-The vagina doesn't stick out like that, it's pretty tucked in and follows the curve.
-The shoulders are a little too broad.
-The overall torso could be a little bigger, but that's not as much of a problem.
Sorry if some of this doesn't make sense. Also, I'm not an expert by any means, these are just my observations.